Today we peer reviewed our annotations and reflections. For this class, I got a lot of feedback that helped with my revision when I got home. A lot of people told me that I needed more of the connectivity between all more sources. They said I did a great job at summarizing, and raising the significance of each article. However, the thing that was lacking was my overall analysis of all the sources, and how they raise a greater argument together.

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We did an exercise last class where we took a sheet of paper, and tried to string up and connect all our sources together. By doing this, we were able to see how each source relates to another. I think I should have used that more to my advantage. One of the challenges for this assignment was fulfilling all the criteria in a concise manner, because had I not cut the length of each annotation, I would have probably ended up struggling to complete all 12 of them.

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