{"id":25,"date":"2016-12-05T07:44:21","date_gmt":"2016-12-05T07:44:21","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/?p=25"},"modified":"2016-12-05T19:11:11","modified_gmt":"2016-12-05T19:11:11","slug":"reflection","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/2016\/12\/05\/reflection\/","title":{"rendered":"Start of Something New"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>When I first checked the syllabus for my composition course, I was beyond happy to see that there was no final. I was happier to see that there wasn\u2019t even an essay due for the final, only a blog.<\/p>\n<div style=\"width: 463px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/upload.wikimedia.org\/wikipedia\/en\/a\/a5\/Canada's_fireworks_at_the_2013_Celebration_of_Light_in_Vancouver,_BC.jpg\" alt=\"Source: Wikimedia\" width=\"453\" height=\"301\" \/><p class=\"wp-caption-text\">Source: Wikimedia<\/p><\/div>\n<p>Basically, I thought I was going to get away with an easy final project which I could finish without much thought. In short, I was wrong. Really wrong. Our prompt was to convert a research-type essay into a more casual blog, which meant\u00a0I had to change my voice to become more casual. This was by far one of the biggest hurdles, and I&#8217;m still struggling to adapt. I have never had to support a thesis using a casual voice, so I felt like everything either came out too robotic or too try-hard.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_31\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-31\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-31\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-4-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"Source: PublicDomainPictures.net\" width=\"300\" height=\"200\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-4-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-4-768x513.jpg 768w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-4-1024x684.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-4.jpg 1920w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-31\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Source: PublicDomainPictures.net<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>What I did<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>With that aside though, I feel like I didn&#8217;t do as bad on other elements of blogging or the assignment. I narrowed my targeted audience to college students who share similar political beliefs with me. In turn, I had to make more stylistic changes to my writing. But to a certain extent, my ideas became more genuine. What I said was more politically oriented and very biased, since I was trying to appeal more to leftist minds. Additionally, I focused my whole argument on how our economy is affecting students the worst, even though students are the backbone of any thriving economy. In other words, I made my arguments directly relatable and personal to my audience.<\/p>\n<p>And since I would be included with you in my targeted audience, I felt like it was actually me talking about what I strongly believed in. I was able to hear my thoughts and actually know that they were something I would say outside of an assignment. I felt invested in what I was saying, it was nothing like talking to a void. It was fun to see my vision grow, but it was also an issue, since I could only write so much.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_32\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-32\" class=\"wp-image-32 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-5-300x212.jpg\" alt=\"Source: Pixabay (Geralt)\" width=\"300\" height=\"212\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-5-300x212.jpg 300w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-5-768x542.jpg 768w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-5.jpg 960w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-32\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Source: Pixabay (Geralt)<\/p><\/div>\n<p>I had to cut out a lot of what I initially intended to put in, alongside the new ideas that popped up as I went into details. Since my argument was more focused around the economy and not social circumstances, I had to completely get rid of my arguments on how minority groups are unfairly tied to their economic status, and how that affects minority students and minority communities. Being a minority, this could have only added to the personal connection I felt with what I was writing. But for all I know, that argument can be another story for another time.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Where am I now<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Obviously, I&#8217;m still not an expert at this, not even close, but I feel like this isn&#8217;t a golden standard for being an &#8220;expert&#8221; at either. Sure, there are ways to improve your voice, or tools to make sure you can find\u00a0<strong>good<\/strong> pictures which are licensed for reuse, but blogging is about speaking from the self. I feel like I did that well.<\/p>\n<p>I definitely have to practice compressing my ideas, using transitions in such short paragraphs, and finding my casual voice, but I feel like I learned a lot about both the blogging community and myself. I see now just how sloppy blogging can be, but how effective it can be to brainstorm new ideas. I can see myself doing a blog-esque routine in the future to help think about and solidify ideas\/arguments.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m still new to this, and probably not the best, but I look forward to using this blog more to learn about myself as a person, as a student, and as a writer.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_33\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignnone\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-33\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-33\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-6-300x225.png\" alt=\"Source: Pixabay (Tumisu)\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-6-300x225.png 300w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-6-768x576.png 768w, https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/files\/2016\/12\/blog-pic-6.png 960w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-33\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Source: Pixabay (Tumisu)<\/p><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Photo Sources:<\/p>\n<p>https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/File:Canada&#8217;s_fireworks_at_the_2013_Celebration_of_Light_in_Vancouver,_BC.jpg<\/p>\n<p>http:\/\/www.publicdomainpictures.net\/hledej.php?hleda=stress<\/p>\n<p>https:\/\/pixabay.com\/p-741507\/?no_redirect<\/p>\n<p>https:\/\/pixabay.com\/p-494153\/?no_redirect<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; When I first checked the syllabus for my composition course, I was beyond happy to see that there was no final. I was happier to see that there wasn\u2019t even an essay due for the final, only a blog. &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/2016\/12\/05\/reflection\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1784,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"qubely_global_settings":"","qubely_interactions":"","kk_blocks_editor_width":"","_kiokenblocks_attr":"","_kiokenblocks_dimensions":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-25","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"gutentor_comment":2,"qubely_featured_image_url":null,"qubely_author":{"display_name":"demendoza","author_link":"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/author\/demendoza\/"},"qubely_comment":2,"qubely_category":"<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/mcen1a\/category\/uncategorized\/\" rel=\"category tag\">Uncategorized<\/a>","qubely_excerpt":"&nbsp; When I first checked the syllabus for my composition course, I was beyond happy to see that there was no final. 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