{"id":70,"date":"2017-03-19T02:10:50","date_gmt":"2017-03-19T02:10:50","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/?p=70"},"modified":"2017-03-21T05:54:47","modified_gmt":"2017-03-21T05:54:47","slug":"label-review","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/2017\/03\/19\/label-review\/","title":{"rendered":"Label Review"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Whenever I picture bloggers in my mind, I see\u00a0them vibing\u00a0at an urban coffee house. Or hanging out on luxurious sofas with a marble cased MacBook Pro and three dogs surrounding them while effortlessly writing\u00a0about food and everyday events. But not me. I sat in my college dining hall and attempted my first blog post on labels in society to the mummers of finals and the clanking of dishes.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_74\" style=\"width: 208px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-74\" class=\"wp-image-74\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/f40e8e85e1055eab246d1fe5753a9a59.jpg\" alt=\"https:\/\/creativemarket.com\/BloomandFlourishShop\/575491-Vertical-Styled-Stock-Image\/screenshots\/#screenshot1\" width=\"198\" height=\"293\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-74\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><a href=\"https:\/\/creativemarket.com\/BloomandFlourishShop\/575491-Vertical-Styled-Stock-Image\/screenshots\/#screenshot1\">#PinterestGoals<\/a><\/p><\/div>\n<div id=\"attachment_76\" style=\"width: 269px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-76\" class=\"wp-image-76 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/imgres-1-1.jpg\" alt=\"imgres-1\" width=\"259\" height=\"194\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-76\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.bcgavel.com\/2014\/03\/28\/10-worst-people-in-bc-dining-lines\/\">You can&#8217;t tell me this is better than the picture above<\/a><\/p><\/div>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>The main difference between me and real bloggers: I did not want to be writing this. In short, I&#8217;ve never been a fan of writing. Any writing, academic or not. Now here I am with an assignment from my english class to turn my eight page paper into a blog post (<span style=\"color: #ff0000\">disclaimer: I&#8217;ve never done this before<\/span>), with\u00a0no desire to do it, and no clue where to start.<\/p>\n<p>Right off the bat, I had <strong>three challenges<\/strong> slap me in the face the minute I attempted to write:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Obstacle 1<\/strong>: How do start I start?? Do I ask a question, do I use a quote, do I just jump right into it?<\/p>\n<p><strong>Obstacle 2<\/strong>: How personal or professional do I make this? Probably not with &#8220;Yo&#8221; or &#8220;Homie&#8221; right? But also not words people need a thesaurus for like &#8220;parsimonious&#8221; or &#8220;ebullient&#8221; right? I also have to include memes which are distracting; I&#8217;ve never used either and don&#8217;t really want to start now.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Obstacle 3<\/strong>: What about the punctuation and formatting: is it text cas or thesis paper\u00a0formal? Are there paragraphs in blogs..?<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_77\" style=\"width: 260px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-77\" class=\"wp-image-77 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/stressed.gif\" alt=\"stressed\" width=\"250\" height=\"150\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-77\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The <a href=\"http:\/\/www.reactiongifs.com\/stressed\/\">feeling<\/a> is mutual<\/p><\/div>\n<p>I sat at my table wracking my brain for an idea and did what any student would: procrastinate by\u00a0turning to internet for \u201cinspiration\u201d (more or less distraction for\u00a0some ideas).<\/p>\n<p>I thoroughly enjoy reading blogs from various health-foodie people I follow on\u00a0social media. I love\u00a0reading <a href=\"https:\/\/www.emilyskye.com\/blog\">Emily Skye\u2019s <\/a>daily fitness\u00a0blogs, <a href=\"https:\/\/katefruitflowers.com\/blogs\/shine-brighter\">Kate Fruit Flower\u2019s <\/a>lifestyle blogs, and last but not least, the one and only\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/imlauramiller.com\/blog\/\">Laura Miller\u2019s<\/a> blogs from her site RAW. VEGAN. NOT GROSS. All of these women are so inspiring to me, so I tuned in to get my daily dose of fresh inspiration while I procrastinated writing my own blog.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_78\" style=\"width: 451px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-78\" class=\"wp-image-78\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/raw-vegan-not-gross.jpg\" alt=\"raw-vegan-not-gross\" width=\"441\" height=\"543\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-78\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Yes, that&#8217;s <a href=\"https:\/\/imlauramiller.com\/cookbook\/\">asparagus<\/a>.<\/p><\/div>\n<p>It wasn&#8217;t\u00a0until after looking at numerous outside blogs and giving myself and hour to write when\u00a0I found the solution to my\u00a0first obstacle:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Solution 1: Recall from memory<\/strong>\u00a0I knew if I were to read my original essay, I would be too tempted to copy and paste sentences. Not that it would be a bad thing considering I wrote it, but the writing was too formal for a\u00a0blog. I decided not to look at the essay once and just type whatever came to mind. I found it more casual, and fitting for my blog. I\u00a0was happy with what I did recall, because I realized the things I did memorize were what I wanted to share most.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_102\" style=\"width: 510px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-102\" class=\"wp-image-102 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/giphy-1.gif\" alt=\"I wonder where to go next\" width=\"500\" height=\"301\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-102\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">I <a href=\"http:\/\/giphy.com\/gifs\/alice-in-wonderland-thinking-KleikEP4xo6hW\">wonder<\/a> how this is gonna work out<\/p><\/div>\n<p>After peer review, the confidence I felt after quickly finishing my draft faded as I realized my blog was too short, had no media, and was not comprehensive enough. I began to work on my blog whenever I felt like it, and blogging began to feel more personal than academic. I\u00a0started to enjoy it (shocking I know) and then\u00a0the two answers my other problems came about:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Solution 2:<\/strong> <strong>Write how you feel<\/strong>\u00a0If I felt like using a larger word I used it, if I felt like using a smaller word I used it; the point was to make the writing relatable to all people. I tired to pick whatever sounded best said a loud, as if I were\u00a0explaining it to someone. For the media\u00a0if I felt emotion after a thought; I captured it in a meme, and if I need a break or further explanation, I added a picture.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_104\" style=\"width: 410px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-104\" class=\"size-full wp-image-104\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/giphy-1-1.gif\" alt=\"&quot;I feel good,&quot; -James Brown\" width=\"400\" height=\"267\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-104\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><a href=\"http:\/\/giphy.com\/gifs\/james-brown-CWf0BHVFANlhS\">&#8220;I feel good,&#8221; -James Brown<\/a><\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>Solution 3:<\/strong> <strong>There is no format\u00a0<\/strong>No, paragraphs do not need 5 sentences; they only need to form cohesive thoughts. Yes, contractions are okay, but sometimes it is okay to write the whole thing out for emphasis or variation. Media is not only important, but essential. As soon as I stopped worrying about making my post between the suggested 500-800 words according to\u00a0my assignment, I wrote similarly\u00a0to how thoughts would enter\u00a0my mind. If I had a long pause in my thoughts, I started a new paragraph. If I wrote something and it recalled an image to mind, I tried to find something to illustrate it. If I made a general comment, I tried to find an article to hyperlink and support it.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_79\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-79\" class=\"wp-image-79 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.scu.edu\/kbates\/files\/2017\/03\/6ep36t.gif\" alt=\"6ep36t\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-79\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><a href=\"http:\/\/giphy.com\/gifs\/james-brown-CWf0BHVFANlhS\">Nailed it<\/a><\/p><\/div>\n<p style=\"text-align: left\">By the time I finished editing, my blog post hardly resembled my original essay. It gave me some\u00a0anxiety, but for the first time I felt writing was a conversation. Blogging became an opportunity for me to connect with my writing on a more personal level, and became fun because it was more relaxed and unprofessional. Even though my blogging experience did not pan out at all to how I thought it would be, it was awesome to see my essay go from seven pages of formal, to one blog of casual.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: left\">\u2665 Little Kelli<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Whenever I picture bloggers in my mind, I see\u00a0them vibing\u00a0at an urban coffee house. Or hanging out on luxurious sofas with a marble cased MacBook Pro and three dogs surrounding them while effortlessly writing\u00a0about food and everyday events. 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