Monthly Archives: December 2016

To Reflect or Not to Reflect: That is Not the Question

How was the revision process?

From the beginning, I realized that this revision would be challenging. As someone who does take pride in their writing, in the first place I spend a lot of time trying to “perfect” my essays to the best of my ability. So it’s difficult to toss all of my hard work out for the sake of shortening it, or reworking it into a blog post. But it was also difficult to actually reword my essay because the way I write tends to be like piecing together a puzzle, every sentence and word choice is intentional so that I can create the best flow. 

Perhaps the greatest challenge though was dealing with my own writer’s block and seeing it reflected in the actual essay. Hindsight is 20/20 after all. Upon revising my essay a week out from writing it, I could see where my flow messed up or where I could’ve done something better. I often found myself cringing upon seeing my so-called mistakes. So it was cathartic in a way then, to revise and simplify.

I say this, however it was still sometimes problematic to rephrase something I had previously written, and deciding on just what examples that I wanted to use. Cutting down was more like reshaping than anything, though I am happy with the way that this process forced me to be more direct and clear, without all the more complicated analysis that sometimes gets in the way of what I would like to say.

Lights, Camera, Pictures!

I am not going to lie, finding images that I wanted to use that I felt effectively conveyed what I wanted to say was extremely hard. I already had some preconceived ideas about what my essay would look like if it was an “image”, so finding a picture that fit that image was difficult.

It was even a little harder to compromise with the images I did find.

Ultimately though, it was fun to use the images. It was a nice stylistic touch to use color that the pictures provided, and it was also a nice break up between text. I’m big on stylized writing, so it was enjoyable to find aesthetic satisfaction.

Overall?

Overall, this was just like writing another blog post to me, though more difficult than most because I had to translate my own writing. It was something along the lines of taking a report and changing it into a story that I would text my friends.

Much more professional in tone of course.

I’ve blogged before, and I’ve figured out my own voice, somewhere between my actual way of speaking and the level of professionalism that I use in essays. Thus, establishing the voice of this blog isn’t something especially difficult to me.

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Instead it was playing translator that proved to be challenging. However, as I continue with this blog, I assume that I’ll find a rhythm that will allow me to take my academic work and transform it into something that a wider audience can read.

What is Education?

When students like myself think “education”, what usually comes to mind is a vague impression of a college campus, maybe a classroom where a lecture is being given or studying textbooks in the library. Furthermore, we assume that being “smart” or “educated” is doing well on tests or getting a college degree, you know, like getting that gold star in school–studying academics in order to receive a rewarding result.

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Yet despite these stereotypes that we possess about education, learning continues to happen outside of school. How to ride a bike, or how to be a nice person (or how to get over your school-induced anxiety) are things that a person learns through life experience rather than lectures. The personal growth that we come experience can also be regarded as this “rewarding result”.

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The question is then, what is a modern day education?

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Is it the traditional image that individuals in mainstream society, like the current First Lady Michelle Obama, put forth? The image that many of us conjure up when we think of education? If so, then education seems to be a “college degree” track that marks education as solely synonymous with formal schooling (Obama).

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Or is it something entirely different? Is modern education more focused on the informal learning that writer Gerald Graff promotes? Do “street smarts [really] beat out book smarts…because they satisfy an intellectual thirst more thoroughly than school culture?” (Graff 267-8)? That is, has traditional education become less important in the face of interest based learning as Graff suggests?

“Neither,” I would like to say.

Education in modern world is not so black and white, nor it is not so one-sided.

While school is important and the lessons learned there are valuable, the view that education is solely academic neglects to acknowledge the impact and importance of informal life lessons. Likewise, although the learning done outside of school has gained recognition and are now commonly considered important emotional/social lessons for a person, there exists different forms of education, not better.

Instead, today’s education is a mixture of these two views, in essence, a reflection of the lives that real people have lived and continued to live. Formal schooling and informal life lessons, after all, are intertwined, one cannot be talked about without referencing the other.

“A reflection of whose lives?” You might ask. “And how are these two types of education intertwined?”

To answer these questions, examine the lives of students, who experience formal schooling during their attendance of either high school or college while undergoing a period of personal growth in the face of becoming independent, dealing with various relationships, and learning about themselves. The informal lessons that these students learn greatly impact the way that they approach their formal education, whether this be performance wise or how they think about/view the topics that are taught in a classroom environment. 

The Lives of Students

Take for example how high school girls are affected by societal lessons about gender, because society teaches that girls are less intelligent and less capable than boys, their performance suffers. As author of Lean In: Women, Work, and the Will to Lead Sheryl Sandberg notes, “[w]hen girls are reminded of their gender before a math or science test…they perform worse” (653-4). Informal lessons, though in this case negative, impact how students function and how they think of themselves, in turn reflecting on their academic work.

Or, if we talk about viewpoints, the materials that are read outside of class (and therefore are not technically considered ‘educational’) often influence the opinions of students. From personal experience, reading and bringing in news about current events and then applying that newfound knowledge to discussions or lessons often helped with my understanding of the ‘textbook’ lessons.

But perhaps the most relevant example for college students like myself, would be the personal statement. An essay that young hopeful high school seniors have to write if they want to attend college. The essay itself about 500 words give or take that is supposed summarize all of a person’ s life lessons and personal growth while also demonstrating their academic ability to summarize/critically reflect on their experiences.

Hello, does that sound like an example of how informal life lessons and formal education can be intertwined or what?

Modern Education

Education equates to experience, and there are many different types of experiences that human persons undergo, thus it becomes coherent that different types of education must also exist. Furthermore, because human lives are defined by these experiences and how we as individuals react to them, ours lives are a collection of lessons and the reflection on those lessons.

The point is, modern education is giant mash-up of all the types of learning that a person experiences throughout their life, and it is important that we continue to see education this way. If we don’t, then we fail to see the full spectrum of our lives, the time that is spent in school and the time that’s not, which all combines to form who we are as individuals.